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26 sats \ 1 reply \ @TheFictionFactory OP 9 May \ parent \ on: FICTION CONTEST - Beneath The Surface the_stacker_muse

Thanks.

Ai, use it for editing. Fresh eyes. Short sentences, mine.

Conversations, lifting McCarthy. Reading a lot of his work lately. But in all honesty its out of laziness.

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5 sats \ 0 replies \ @bitcoingraffiti 9 May

Alright, sir.

Then I guess it would help if you put in quotation marks for the dialogue. Now it's unclear whether it's narration or spoken words. Similar with the short words, I'd say. In some cases they work, in others it increases confusion.

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